Inquiry - The importance of giving feedback

Term two has started smoothly and we are continuing our inquiry into our local area. We have been researching the way Brunswick East has changed over time with a particular focus on the Merri Creek. Using inspiration from the Jeanie Baker book, “Window” the children are drafting artwork that depicts the way the creek and surrounding areas looked during specific eras.

Last term the groups had already completed a first draft of their artwork. Many children felt that their work was finished and they were ready to move onto the next phase. We showed the Learning Community the clip, “Austin’s Butterfly”. This clip highlighted to the students the importance of giving constructive feedback and being open to accept and improve on your work. The link is attached below, please have a look.


Following a group discussion about the clip the children were asked to place their first drafts on display with a blank piece of paper next to it. Their peers were then able to move around the room and give written feedback based on the draft. The children did this exceptionally well and were very constructive and detailed in their feedback. When the groups returned to their artwork and read the feedback they were very accepting an appreciative of their peers honesty and suggestions.

So…… as you can guess they were now all itching to have a go at a second draft, keeping the feedback that they had received in mind! It was a powerful session and learning experience. Well done to the children of Alveare for being brave, acting in a mature way and trying something new!