Writing in Alveare
Hello families,
In this blog we have just a tiny sample of some of the incredible writing that has been happening in our Learning Community. The children have regular Writing Workshops and Toolboxes to help them learn the technical skills that are involved in writing as well as familiarising them with the range of text types that authors use.
Thank you to the parent helpers that have given their time this term to help our children type up their stories, your help is much appreciated.
Some published work by the children can be found in the Alveare reading corner. You are welcome at anytime to come and peruse the range of quality literature!
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The Shark and the Human
0ne sunny day I went to the beach
By Matthew
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The Adventures of Captain Scowl
Once there lived a guy named Captain Scowl. He was a dolphin. He was massive. He was also good. He had sharp fins. Captain Scowl was on a mission to capture the Slimy Guys. They were bad and very slimy.
His base was called Wow Team. Captain Scowl was at the bad guys base. There were lasers guarding their base. Captain Scowl was also flexible. So he could go through the lasers, and he did. But there was a code also.
“Ahhhh ohhhh”, said Captain Scowl “I do not know what the code is”. “Wait a minute, there is a back door!” But the slimy guys were guarding the base, but he could catch them. Captain Scowl ran to his base.
The boss said, “Good job” to Captain Scowl. “You captured eleven bad guys, you did a very good job”. THE END
"I like writing because I like writing stories that you get to publish in the end" Milo
Things I Like and Things I Don’t Like
Things I like
Things I don’t like
Sports
Mud
"I like writing about other people. This is called a biography" Jude E
The Magical Rainbow
One gloomy night Veronica woke up with her furry teddy with one eye. She went to Lila’s cuddly bed and fell asleep. As soon as Veronica fell asleep, Lily started crying and woke up the whole family.
Veronica, Lola, Lila, Anya, Ed and Ted woke up. “What’s that racket?” said Anya.
“You’re a chatterbox Lola” said Ed.
“No I’m not.”
THE END
"I like to write made up stories" Connor
The Amazing Super Girls Joke Book
Why did the skeleton go to the dance party?
Because he wanted to see the boogieman.
Why did the skeleton cross the road?
Because he wanted to go the boogieman.
What do you call a skeleton who sit around doing nothing?
Lazy bones.
What do you call a skeleton that lazes around?
What do you call a person with hairy legs?
What do you call a monster who had hairy legs?
What is a vampire’s favourite fruit?
What do you call a person with hairy legs ?
"I like writing because it is enjoyable. It is quiet" Siam
Alliteration by Ted
Batman biting on balloons.
Dogs dig for dirty dinner.
Cats crawl creepily
Javier jumps jealously.
Seven suns setting in the South.
Two teddies talking on the teddyphone.
One octopus opening oranges.
Hello families,
In this blog we have just a tiny sample of some of the incredible writing that has been happening in our Learning Community. The children have regular Writing Workshops and Toolboxes to help them learn the technical skills that are involved in writing as well as familiarising them with the range of text types that authors use.
Thank you to the parent helpers that have given their time this term to help our children type up their stories, your help is much appreciated.
Some published work by the children can be found in the Alveare reading corner. You are welcome at anytime to come and peruse the range of quality literature!
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The Shark and the Human
Thank you to the parent helpers that have given their time this term to help our children type up their stories, your help is much appreciated.
Some published work by the children can be found in the Alveare reading corner. You are welcome at anytime to come and peruse the range of quality literature!
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The Shark and the Human
0ne sunny day I went to the beach
and there was a humongous
great white shark
and a human and
the army. The shark almost killed
the human but the army sliced it
in half and found some gold
at the bottom of the sea.
They lived happily ever after.
By Matthew
The End
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The Adventures of Captain Scowl
By Freddy
Once there lived a guy named Captain Scowl. He was a dolphin. He was massive. He was also good. He had sharp fins. Captain Scowl was on a mission to capture the Slimy Guys. They were bad and very slimy.
His base was called Wow Team. Captain Scowl was at the bad guys base. There were lasers guarding their base. Captain Scowl was also flexible. So he could go through the lasers, and he did. But there was a code also.
“Ahhhh ohhhh”, said Captain Scowl “I do not know what the code is”. “Wait a minute, there is a back door!” But the slimy guys were guarding the base, but he could catch them. Captain Scowl ran to his base.
The boss said, “Good job” to Captain Scowl. “You captured eleven bad guys, you did a very good job”. THE END
"I like writing because I like writing stories that you get to publish in the end" Milo
Things I Like and Things I Don’t Like
By Anya
Things I like
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Things I don’t like
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Sports
Art Music
School
Writing
Inquiry
Games
Reading
T.V
Photo booth
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Mud
Getting Wet
Being too hot
Sunscreen
Getting a cold
Computer games
Soccer
Getting punched
Maths
Percy Jackson
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"I like writing about other people. This is called a biography" Jude E
The Magical Rainbow
By Oscar
One gloomy night Veronica woke up with her furry teddy with one eye. She went to Lila’s cuddly bed and fell asleep. As soon as Veronica fell asleep, Lily started crying and woke up the whole family.
Veronica, Lola, Lila, Anya, Ed and Ted woke up. “What’s that racket?” said Anya.
“It’s Lily”, said Lola.
“A rainbow” said Ed.
“Quick make a wish everyone” said Lola.
“You’re a chatterbox Lola” said Ed.
“No I’m not.”
“I wish……” said everyone.
“What did you wish for?” said Lila to Anya.
“I’m not telling you” said Anya to Lila.
“Wishes are meant to be secrets”.
Ted said, “yes”.
THE END
"I like to write made up stories" Connor
The Amazing Super Girls Joke Book
By Veronica and Taya
Why did the skeleton go to the dance party?
Because he wanted to see the boogieman.
Why did the skeleton cross the road?
Because he wanted to go the boogieman.
What do you call a skeleton who sit around doing nothing?
Lazy bones.
What do you call a skeleton that lazes around?
Lazy bones.
What do you call a person with hairy legs?
Hairy legs.
What do you call a monster who had hairy legs?
A hairy Legged monster.
What is a vampire’s favourite fruit?
Nectarines
What do you call a person with hairy legs ?
hairy legs
"I like writing because it is enjoyable. It is quiet" Siam
Alliteration by Ted
Batman biting on balloons.
Dogs dig for dirty dinner.
Cats crawl creepily
Javier jumps jealously.
Seven suns setting in the South.
Two teddies talking on the teddyphone.
One octopus opening oranges.